Chapter Zero-Page-14

Okay, so I'm getting the impression that you've worked on this for some time, because there is a marked improvement in the art quality in recent pages, that's good, improvement is always good

So the plot itself is pretty interesting, I like how the plot centers around the main character planning to warn her parents about Prof. Birch's grudge and revenge against Norman, and his lingering affection towards her mother. (Both don't seem to taking her (or Birch) seriously though, that makes things a tad bit difficult as well as funny XD)
I also like the comical pacing and the odd fetish tone set by Birch and the Treecko (Kisshu, I think?) The unique humour is what made me give you that favourite

I'm not going to criticize you on your drawings too much, because you know, drawing takes time and improvement, but your drawings at least clear enough for me to see what is going on, so that's good
Be careful with that new line tool you've been using tho, some of the lines can make the drawings a bit confusing

All in all, this is a very uniquely entertaining and humourous comic, and I do hope you continue this run ^^